my Resume (need Help)

[Nitronic]

Here is my Resume does any1 have ideas on what to add


Dean Doyle


Address


Contact Info




A Bit About myself
Hello my name is Dean Doyle and I am looking to help you. I am Currently Attending Pine Rivers State High School. I am hard working ,loyal and very approachable

Education
Currently Attending Pine Rivers State High School


Work Experience
None as of yet I am looking for my first job


References
Name, Position. Company, Phone
Name, Position. Company, Phone


Languages
I am Fluent in English and Have studied German for the past 5 yrs
Interests and Activities
I have interests In making new friends and learning new skills

Hobbies
My Hobbies: My Hobbies Include going on Bike rides Going out with friends and Being friendly

 

[Mave]

lol, I suppose it's okay

 

[Nitronic]

I finaly Convinced my Mother to let me get a job so im doing up a resume and stuff =] im so happy First Job FTW

 

[BoxFucker101]

You come off as a big creeper if you keep talking about being friendly...

And I might be able to help you if you tell me what job you're aiming for...

 

[Austin]

Note: Box is... 12 or 13. I don't see how he'd help.

 

[BoxFucker101]

Note: Box is... 12 or 13. I don't see how he'd help.

Note: I have common sense and have over-heard my parents talking to my sister about what to put on her resume for a local pharmacy, where she now is currently employed.

and onto topic:

Tell why you want the job, your resume is very vague.

 

[Austin]

You take mini-classes on how to write resumes, when your a bit older. Overhearing your parents won't teach you anything, other then your nosy. He already knows far more then what you could tell him.

 

[Nitronic]

In english theirs a Thing on resumes but thats not till second semester =[

 

[Austin]

:/ how old are you?

 

[Nitronic]

14 turning 15

 

[Killer7]

At my country you can't work with that age. Aren't you a little young to looking for a job?